Digital Raven (digitalraven) wrote,
Digital Raven
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Option X

Yes, I have written more of it. Be amazed, damn you.

Clicky for the new part or Clicky for all

This was the first not to be written in first person present. I decided early on to try my hardest to keep in third person present instead. It's a genre trope that even flashbacks are always present tense. Big fight scenes are also a genre trope. Well, that and a rather nice way for me to blow off steam by writing them. :)

Comments on anything in the new part or the whole thing overall is mandatory. Even if it's just "You suck. Stop writing this shite."
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