February 6th, 2005

Brainiac

Shattered City: 1

This pacing malarkey is hard. I feel like I should be burning through at one idea per paragraph, throwing all the details out at once. But I've done that before, and it really doesn't work for any kind of detective/mystery story. It needs planning and pacing, details revealed as the characters find them.

Doesn't stop the beginning feeling very slow.

As a bonus: Every reference you can find to genre fiction of any form nets a cookie.

Shattered City: 1
by Stewart Wilson

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