February 17th, 2005

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Shattered City: 3

In which we learn of the Clade and the wunches, and see the Hunter Square riot in full flow.

My only gripe is with Nicole being female. Don't want people to think I gave her a chance to show off last part only to have her play the girl-who-needs-rescuing stereotype for the rest of it. I'll see how it feels when I read it through tomorrow, though other viewpoints are always useful.

7000 words so far. Bloody hell.

Shattered City: 3
by Stewart Wilson

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Edit: Updated to stop Nicole from acting like a bonehead. I like her too much for that.
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